Double Page Finished

I was told that it looked boring with all dull colours and just overall looked really dull
I changed it and was told this was really good.

Double Page Edited

A couple people have mentioned that the photos here show someone really young and would look better with an older artist.



I was told this is a lot better than the previous double page spread.

Double Page spread

I have gone away and done what the focus group have suggested to me

This is the new feedback I got from my focus group:

The new feedback was that the middle picture seemed to stand out a lot and would look better if I faded it or edited it in another way to make it blend in well

Double Page spread

I have listened to the focus group and added something else to the double page spread to make it more effective. I have put a guitar in the background. The guitar is in black and white. I have done this because I needed a way to make sure that the attention is not on the guitar that it is on the rest of the article instead.

Focus group feed back:

Still change the centre picture but make the guitar a bit bigger over the page and fill the bottom left corner with something as it looks rather blank.

First draft of my double page spread

Here is a copy of the first draft of my music magazine :

Focus Group feedback
I was told that this looked really effective but the middle picture needed to be a bit bigger and fill the gap required and aldo that it should be a bit brighter and brighten up the page.
I was also told that it looked a bit blank in area so i hould fill it up with something.

Middle Page Spread layout

I wanted to have a clear easy reading layout for the reader but at the same time have a really eyecatching article.

This is my layout for my double page spread.

Contents Page

This was better but still may need some improving

Contents Page

I was told this was better but still looked a bit plain in areas.

So I need to put more into the bottom left corner

Contents page edited

I have edited the contents page.

I was told this was better but the bottom left corner didn't look very good.