Tuesday 15 March 2011

First draft of my double page spread

Here is a copy of the first draft of my music magazine :





Focus Group feedback
I was told that this looked really effective but the middle picture needed to be a bit bigger and fill the gap required and aldo that it should be a bit brighter and brighten up the page.
I was also told that it looked a bit blank in area so i hould fill it up with something.

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